This is the second draft of my piece, now entitled; Choo – Choo. Since the first draft I have made some minor eq adjustments and added tape delay in certain areas. I have also experimented with panning and plug-in automation to adjust the location of some sounds as well as the intensity of the delay and eq effects. I have applied reversing, and cutting and splicing techniques in more areas and adjusted the arrangement of some sounds. Finally, I shortened the piece by a few measures.
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I really liked the industrial feel to this piece. I thought that the ending was a little abrupt. Maybe you could add a fade or come up with away for the piece to wrap itself up so that the ending is clear